Thursday 28 March 2019

65 Miners Doom!

Today we did poems about the Brunner Mine that we went to last Friday.
This is my poem called 65 Miners Doom!
The language features I used were rhyme and onomatopoeia.

1 comment:

  1. Great work Abbie! I like your use of rhyme and onomatopoeia. Good on you!

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